Inuyasha: A random story I wrote

STORY TWO: A RANDOM STORY
???Grandpa, your excuses of my absences are ridiculous!??? Kagome said.
???I think using the excuse, ???Inuyasha is a doctor and Kagome is visiting him for her daily dentist appointment,??? is a great excuse!??? Kagome???s grandpa complained.
???Grandpa, doctors don???t do what dentists do!??? Kagome groaned.
Inuyasha suddenly came in Kagome???s house yelling, ???KAGOME!!! Some idiot just made a loud noise at me with a machine and screamed at me to get off the street when I was just chilling!???
???ON THE STREET?!???
???Yeah, it was a hard, black road!???
???Anyway, I need to go to school Inuyasha!??? Kagome said. ???Don???t bully Shippo!???
???Yeah, right,???
???SIT!!!???
???Fine, OK, gosh!???
After School . . .

Hojo walks up to Kagome and begins flirting.
???Hi Kagome!???
Inuyasha was right there, next to Kagome and got mad.
???Iron Reaper ??????
???SIT!!!???
???GRRR??????
???Anyway, Inuyasha, have you been nice to Shippo????
???Of course!!!???
Shippo then runs to Kagome crying. (He has bumps and bruises he didn???t have the day before!
???Inuyasha hit me,???
???SIT!!!???
Hojo was puzzled by what was going on, but he asked her, ???Wanna go out????
???Wind??????
???SIT!!???
???Yes, Hojo, I would like to,??? Kagome said.
Not, she thought.
???What just happened???? asked Shippo.
???Stupid squirrel,???
???SIT! SIT BOY!!!???
Hojo ran away in fright and annoyance.
Kikyo suddenly appeared, walking over to where Kagome and Inuyasha were fighting.
But, suddenly a girl named Jasmine Smith grabbed a chainsaw and began shredding Kikyo!
Kagome frowned at the incident and Shippo fainted, but, Inuyasha actually smiled a little!

What'd ya think?