heres a poem i wrote.please no one take it thank you.
Whats love
Will i ever find love?Is it looking for me?What is love?Is it the connection between to people or is it more?More than anything.Love is complex.Is love knowing you can stare someone in the eyes and knowing there the one.Knowing that there going to be there for you,to hold you,to protect you?How does one know that there love loves them?Do they tell you under the stars or do they simply just dont tell you at all.How does one love one that does not feel the same?Is it really love?is there someone out there looking for me?Is someone wanting to love me?Wanting to hold me,to be there for me,to protect me?Will i find love?Will it find me?Will we find each other?
116 years, 1 month & 28 days ago 29th Oct 2008 17:52
stopping by again to say,great poem!
116 years, 1 month & 28 days ago 29th Oct 2008 17:45
shakira202
Thanks for commenting!
116 years, 1 month & 29 days ago 28th Oct 2008 17:08
FUNNY I NEVER HEAR such stand up comedy! Love abby54321
116 years, 1 month & 29 days ago 28th Oct 2008 16:56
shakira202
Thank you very much for saying I was a good poet, boredfriend2828.
116 years & 2 months ago 25th Oct 2008 21:44
I like it But I think if you put some of the sentences in stanza So it can have a more effect voice. comment if u do not understand. Ps, u R a very good poem writer.
116 years, 2 months & 1 day ago 25th Oct 2008 07:28
shakira202
Thank you.I love to write!
116 years, 2 months & 2 days ago 24th Oct 2008 17:19
woah! aahw! you're a good writer Keep iT UP!!^^ xoxo jagdb18
116 years, 2 months & 2 days ago 24th Oct 2008 17:16
ill MM it
116 years, 2 months & 3 days ago 23rd Oct 2008 17:23
i have a song called wuts luv
116 years, 2 months & 3 days ago 23rd Oct 2008 17:22
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abby54321
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