heres a poem i wrote.please no one take it thank you.
Whats love
Will i ever find love?Is it looking for me?What is love?Is it the connection between to people or is it more?More than anything.Love is complex.Is love knowing you can stare someone in the eyes and knowing there the one.Knowing that there going to be there for you,to hold you,to protect you?How does one know that there love loves them?Do they tell you under the stars or do they simply just dont tell you at all.How does one love one that does not feel the same?Is it really love?is there someone out there looking for me?Is someone wanting to love me?Wanting to hold me,to be there for me,to protect me?Will i find love?Will it find me?Will we find each other?
116 years, 3 months & 16 days ago 12th Sep 2008 20:05
its like a shackbeer poem.i spelled that wrong.thanks for saying it was beatiful. ------------------- no problem
what kind of poem, never heard of a shackbeer poem
116 years, 3 months & 17 days ago 12th Sep 2008 07:57
shakira202
thank you.
116 years, 3 months & 17 days ago 11th Sep 2008 16:33
thats a cute poam! u rock = D
116 years, 3 months & 17 days ago 11th Sep 2008 16:32
shakira202
thank you butter
116 years, 3 months & 17 days ago 11th Sep 2008 16:27
i think the poem rocks
116 years, 3 months & 17 days ago 11th Sep 2008 15:54
shakira202
thanks for the comment!
116 years, 3 months & 18 days ago 10th Sep 2008 16:00
Lovely poem I'm terrible at poems, I can't even write a Haiku
116 years, 3 months & 18 days ago 10th Sep 2008 15:58
shakira202
its like a shackbeer poem.i spelled that wrong.thanks for saying it was beatiful.
116 years, 3 months & 18 days ago 10th Sep 2008 15:36
put it into stanza's next, that's more common to do for poems. I get the feeling it's more a short story/comment than a poem and that's sad cause it's pretty beautiful actually
116 years, 3 months & 18 days ago 10th Sep 2008 14:23
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