please rate mai story

please remember that i dont have a title in mind at the moment and would appreciate if at the ed you would also after the comment give me a name for the book but you dont have to.

CHAPTER 1
Cold, so cold.How long have i woken up to below frezzing mornings? i have no idea.all i know is that i must suffer these frezzing mornings most of my life for who would marry a poor orphan? nobody.i can hear sobbing its most likely lucy the new girl in my dorm. she always starts sobbing every morning. lucy has very fair hair and midnight black eyes, shes very skinny and cheerful and she came to the orphanage two weeks ago because her parents were killed in a freak accident.

thats all i have so far so please remember to comment
kk
Medy