the first page of the book im working on

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It was a cold, stormy night and penny had nowhere to go, as the streets flooded her with dirt and rain she tripped. She started to cry to herself, Penny new that no one could help her, no one could look after her and tell her it would all be ok because she new it wouldn't.

Her father and step-mother would soon find her she had to go otherwise she would get beaten to her own death. she had no money or food to eat, she had been starved at home to so she had no food for over a week now.

Her weak body tryed to get up but it wouldn't penny new she had no choice so she forced herself up and started to run like her life depended on it. looking behing her every few steps to make sure her father and stepmother wasn't behind her but one step further and she heard, she fell she tryed to escape.........