I like this!its the best I have done on a roleplay

Flipendo? Ok here goes
Name:Morwena
Parents:Nora and Micheal Riley
Year/house: 4th,Ravenclaw
Personality:Very smart and shy.Likes cats,is an only child after her mother and father and baby brother died in a tragic fire.She is a muggle born and this makes her a little hesitant about using magic.
Morwena cautiosly made her way up to the great hall.A sea of people racing and laughing.As if an invisible hand were there,pulling her back,she stopped.There on the steps waitig for her,was nick. Gainig her self back,she ducked her head and let the tide of people carry her past him."morwena!wait please!"She stopped and turned torward him.breithing a sigh of releif he beckond her closer."your avoiding me!"he hissed.Morwena,clearly annoyed,looked around and whispered"I am not!Leave me alone,I dont want to be late for dinner!"
"Morwena!That doesnt matter!listen..tonight meet me down at the kitchens,k?"He gripped her arm,not letting go.Morwena nodded and ripped her hand out of his grip and swept away.