Unwritten Commandments

A story I started on a diff site but I might aswell post up here xD Remember, I kinda fail at stories so get used to my failness

Heaven.
Sounds like complete paradise, until you wake up there. At the beginning it was a beauty, everyone loved each other and it felt like a brand new start for all of us.
Until our split.

A large war brought chaos to Heaven; friends soon became enemies in a battle to save the Angel nation. Nothing could be brought to agreement; every idea was chucked away and left unwanted. All people wanted to do was fight over there rights as one of the Angels in Heaven who deserved to be heard. Finally over a long battle which cost a lot of lives, a high amount of people came to the agreement of splitting up Heaven itself. It was placed into two teams, the Angels and the Dark Angels. The fighting had luckily stopped but they were now not allowed to mix and it ended up a lot emptier in places which were usually busy. Some areas were just recognised as bomb zones.

It was beginning to feel like Heaven was slowly becoming a Hell for anyone who stepped into the bomb areas, they would think they had mixed up the two. Of course they weren't, they had the correct place, but it was obviously unusual for a place which is considered 'Heaven' to look so different than the paintings of it.

Tachibana, the leading angel in Heaven had gone missing. No one knew where she would be; also people were considering the worst.

Was Tachibana just another fallen angel?

"Hey, look at this!" China beamed.
"What is it?" Tachibana said dazedly; still in quite a tired mood from yesterdays all night stay up time.
"There's a report of another Fallen Angel." China looked at it closer, taking too many looks at the picture that pretty much caused it to smudge.
"Who this time?" Tachibana asked, acting a tiny bit more interested.
"Well her name is supposed to be 'Playing Music' or something." China replied.
"Don't you mean it means that?" Tachibana asked, seeming a bit more curious now.
"Yes, yes! Sorry." China looked down suddenly in embarrassment.

Tachibana walked away, finding it quite amusing that her friend thought 'Playing Music' was a name. Although she knew she couldn't show any emotions. She would never even be able to show emotions. The risks of becoming an angel cause the loss of emotions, they don't want you to have normal humans worrying over Fallen Angels of course.

Well that's what they're all calling Tachibana; Fallen Angel. Even though it was said when you become a Fallen Angel it means you lose your powers and forget every memory of Heaven. How come it never happened to her? You only become a Fallen Angel if you lose your spiritual beliefs, her beliefs are said to be the strongest in Heaven, and she just wished they would understand why she was actually down on Earth.

They still haven't realised Tachibana is that girl on the newspaper, only the people up in Heaven know that. She doesn't understand how it reached Earth, usually it's what starts in Heaven stays in Heaven.

They need to know the real reason of why I'm Earth. I need to find my past, the reason why I got in Heaven in the first place.

So, failed it rite ^^