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LiverFire

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My Poems

29th Sep 2010 19:13

14 years, 1 month & 21 days ago

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LiverFire 3 Comments

My Poems

14 years, 1 month & 21 days ago

29th Sep 2010 19:13

You
By: Geena

I think about you day and night.
It's anything but a fight.
You'll take me up in your arms,
And pull me close to your chest.
I'm pretty sure you get the rest.
The desire of being with you
And pain when I am without you
Is overwhelming.
You are the skip to my step,
And the beat to my heart.
As you might spot a mile away,
I can love you in any way.

Ask
By: Geena

As time ticks by,
Or maybe tocks.
I think about your short black locks.
When?
How?
Where?
Why?
These are the questions I ask
While looking into your eyes.

Enchanting
By: Geena

Your voice can charm a deadly cobra.
Your eyes can melt the sun.
Your smell is overwhelming.
Your touch is irresistible.
Everything about you is perfect.
You are more than that.
You are enchanting.

Want
By: Geena

I want to hear you.
I want to see you.
I want to touch you,
Smell you,
Taste you...
I want you so bad.
I can't handle being without such beauty.
You complete my soul.
I want you to be with me...

LiverFire

I am not a rhyming poet. I can't tell you how it goes, because these are my dreams I have set out. We aren't actually going out, so I'm not sure how to describe it. Tongue Out

14 years, 1 month & 19 days ago

1st Oct 2010 21:26

I look into your deep blue eyes
Even when I'm petrified
I would risk my life for you

I seem to find the way you act
Like a magnet making me attract
What do I have to do

I would travel the world to hear you speak
That deep toned voice makes me in love heaps

When it's raining we huddle together
You give me a red rose, make it all better

Then I say that forever
We'll be together, you'd never let me go, no,no,no.

When I'm crying out my heart to you
You listen take in emotion
And when I'm confused, don't know what to do
Your kisses are the magical potion

You make me feel like a petal from a flower
thinking bout you every minute of every hour
And when I need a little bit of assistance
You come so far no matter distance

And give me another reason
To love you more then I do (echoes second time)
You know I love you

They are so powerful words
And when you said the to me
My heart skipped 1 billion beats
Suddenly I was free

I want to hear it again
Want to see your lips move
I want to hold your soft hand
Wanna spend time with you
I want to taste your sweet cherry lips
And pull my hand through your soft hair
I wanna be with you, nobody else
It really matters to me that I know you care

Time passes
People change
But we know nothing will happen
we will stay the same, all the way

When you ask me a question
The answers always in my heart
And when we rarely fight
We just restart

Your a charm
With sexy arms
Your eyes are crystal clear blue.
Your smell is sweet.
It starts to heat between me and you
Your touch is irresistible. (your line)
Your as perfect as can be.
Practically a wizard, who has enchanted me.

14 years, 1 month & 20 days ago

30th Sep 2010 00:04

you - 8/10

your rhyming needs to be in the same places but it is very emotional

some grammar mistakes contained but nice description

instead of 3rd line try somehing like...

I feel braver when I'm in your arms
and you hug me to your chest

im pretty sure you get the rest sort of ruins the romantic feel, try something like...

You are the very best

I wrote one, see...

I look into your deep blue eyes
Even when I'm petrified
I would risk my life for you

I seem to find the way you act
Like a magnet making me attract
What do I have to do

I would travel the world to hear you speak
That deep toned voice makes me in love heaps

When it's raining we huddle together
You give me a red rose

Make me make you say forever
We'll be together, you'd never me go
When I'm crying out my heart to you
You listen take in emotion
And when I'm confused, don't know what to do
Your kisses are the magical potion

You make me feel like a petal from a flower
thinking bout you every minute of every hour
And when I need a little bit of assistance
You come so far no matter distance

And give me another reason
To love you more then I do (echoes second time)
You know I love you

They are so powerful words
And when you said the to me
My heart skipped 1 billion beats
Suddenly I was free

I want to hear it again
Want to see your lips move
I want to hold your soft hand
Wanna spend time with you
I want to taste your sweet cherry lips
And pull my hand through your soft hair
I wanna be with you, nobody else
It really matters to me that I know you care

Time passes
People change
But we know nothing will happen
we will stay the same, all the way

When you ask me a question
The answers always in my heart
And when we rarely fight
We just restart

Your a charm
With sexy arms
Your eyes are crystal clear blue.
Your smell is sweet.
It starts to heat between me and you
Your touch is irresistible. (your line)
Your as perfect as can be.
Practically a wizard, who has enchanted me.

Instead of saying what he is try puttng in a little bit of how you feel (person speaking)

for example: instead of anything but a fight try something like this love is worth the fight

14 years, 1 month & 20 days ago

30th Sep 2010 00:01