"Mommy.....Mommy.....Mommy!"I shrieked." She's dead kid."A woman said. She had cotton candy pink hair and piercing blue eyes."Now it???s your turn!"The woman said and struck me through the heart with a sword. She slowly pulled the sword out of me and walked away. She turned back and said with a chuckle "Child of prophecy...there's no way."She turned and walked into the shadows. If I was human I would've died already. My life hanging by a thread. A boy ran to me and picked me up in his arms."Dusk! Hang on! Please don't leave...."his voice became softer as I slipped away from consciousness. All I know is that I survived drinking his blood. But sadly that day I lost my mother.
wolfie1234
Yes well I just started trying to write.So I'm not very good at writing yet.
114 years, 10 months & 5 days ago 22nd Feb 2010 15:43
I would love to see some more descriptive images. Overall I would say it is a pretty descent prologue.
114 years, 10 months & 8 days ago 18th Feb 2010 20:23
14 years, 10 months & 9 days ago
Facebook
Google
1
