Inproved song!!!!!

i was stupid
and blinded by my own 2 hands
thinkin we were the only ones on these beatiful lands,
couldn't think it would ever even be this way
and now...
it's the start of a very sad day


cause the tears just won't stop fallin
can't even think of a day i wasn't, i mean every time something makes my life happy and great, something comes along to makes me think... lord can you give me a break?
cause...

I break down
And just start cryin
Cause it to much for me to handle
I just can't believe it's happening to me again.

what do you think?