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  1. The Lie I Live
    21st Dec 2009 13:27
    14 years, 9 months & 16 days ago
  2. Warriors RP
    19th Dec 2009 19:14
    14 years, 9 months & 17 days ago
  3. The Insane; Story
    19th Dec 2009 17:15
    14 years, 9 months & 17 days ago
  4. Night of Zin
    14th Mar 2009 08:53
    15 years, 6 months & 23 days ago
Night of Zin
15 years, 6 months & 23 days ago
14th Mar 2009 08:53

???Kuluzinaki is the creator God and that cannot be denied. She was born from the ashes of the first world, the failure world, which had survived only two weeks without Gods to control them. ???Kuluzinaki is the creator God and that cannot be denied. She was born from the ashes of the first world, the failure world, which had survived only two weeks without Gods to control them. She sprung up with ivory skin, flowing raven black hair and wide blue eyes. Clothes were not needed then, so she shivered in the darkness of the universe, feeling strangely alone. Kuluzinaki wanted a companion, so she tore a strip of skin from her breast and made another God, smaller then her that would serve as her child. This female was dubbed Zinzin.

???Zinzin grew to be a fine women and assisted Kuluzinaki in the creation of our world, she even gave strips of skin to her mother to help creature humans, but Zinzin soon grew jealous and her blue eyes turned green with envy. ???I am far more fit then that ghastly women to be creator God,??? Zinzin had thought viciously, and so she began to plan a plot against the beautiful God, and it was one she saw as foolproof.???

???But it wasn???t, right Zinul! It was one of the most Sliced bread is sliceded up plans ever!??? Howled a ruddy faced boy, rocking with silent laughter; he looked up at me and smiled meekly at the look I shot him.

???Impudence is not tolerated here, Terrin. Keep that in mind before we sacrifice you.??? I hissed, the ultimate threat, my fingers tightening on the wooden staff I held. It was decorated with intricate paintings, done on the Night of Zin. His face paled for a moment, I never kidded about such things.

My gaze swept along our small Clan, brows slightly raised as I silently dared any of them to contradict my words or to act as Terrin had. Wisely, they all remained silent and most of their gazes flicked away from mine.

???Now, as Terrin was so kind to point out, Zinzin???s plan was???Sliced bread is sliceded up. She made two humans and threw them in a pit of hot water; pretending that she was too weak to help, Zinzin managed to trick Kuluzinaki into going after the two. Immediately, she called upon the frozen winds, but the heat of the water melted any ice or snow and Kuluzinaki came to the top in a rage, clutching the two dead ???burnt- humans in her hands. ???Look at this! Look at what you???ve done!??? She had cried, leaping at her daughter with the ferocity of a lion.

???Zinzin was unable to dodge the attack and, within moments, her mother had killed her. Zinzin condemned humans to mortality, but Kuluzinaki left us because of one mistake,??? My eyes flashed as my lips curled away from my teeth, ???So, on the Night of Zin, we honor this female God who would not have left us. We sacrifice those her mother created, hoping that their blood will bring her back once more.???

I bowed my head, staring at the moist ground. Silence greeted me and I smirked; sometimes, I still had a story to share, but tonight I was done and my head stayed down, my neck painfully bent. Hesitant claps filled the clearing and then there was an uproar of shouts and catcalls- ???Shut up! Shut up!??? A gangly red-head stood, smacking others with a flat hand and equally flat stick. Her green eyes blazed with a strange fire as she added, through tightly clenched teeth, ???They can hear you! Do you want them to find us? We must remain hidden!??? She looked at me, hoping she was right, and I nodded, catching my cousin???s eyes for only a moment.

???She is right. I would???ve thought that those of you who are part of the council would???ve known this, but I suppose a silly yarn penetrates your mind too deeply for you to hold onto any sense of reality.???

vanessa1000
thats a good idea. I would do that as well but i like to confuse myself and add different things into my writting as i write out my stories.
115 years, 1 month & 16 days ago 20th Aug 2009 14:02
 
Awww, thanks.

I've been writing up traiditons, rules, etc for them before doing any more- so I don't mess up.
115 years, 2 months & 27 days ago 10th Jul 2009 08:49
 
vanessa1000
That is really good! I myself am a writter and stunned at this. You are lucky to have such creativity for something like this
115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 25th Jun 2009 20:56
 
I forgot about this.

Thanks, guys.

(now, to force myself to edit)
115 years, 5 months & 12 days ago 25th Apr 2009 12:00
 
Great story Banessa!
115 years, 5 months & 16 days ago 21st Apr 2009 13:14
 
Did you write this? I you did you are a good writer.
115 years, 5 months & 17 days ago 19th Apr 2009 23:13
 
  1. The Lie I Live
    21st Dec 2009 13:27
    14 years, 9 months & 16 days ago
  2. Warriors RP
    19th Dec 2009 19:14
    14 years, 9 months & 17 days ago
  3. The Insane; Story
    19th Dec 2009 17:15
    14 years, 9 months & 17 days ago
  4. Night of Zin
    14th Mar 2009 08:53
    15 years, 6 months & 23 days ago