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herbiemn
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    14th Nov 2013 14:35
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    17th Dec 2008 17:24
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    16 years & 18 days ago
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    30th Nov 2008 13:48
    16 years & 25 days ago
  5. Kitties. A little Info and Examples. <3
    1st Nov 2008 19:24
    16 years, 1 month & 23 days ago
  6. Blindapple's Story
    21st Oct 2008 18:46
    16 years, 2 months & 3 days ago
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  8. Herb Code and Fighting moves. ;]
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Blindapple's Story
16 years, 2 months & 3 days ago
21st Oct 2008 18:46

Well, I copied BB111. xD THis is about my Blind kitty, whom I write about with my friends. You will read much about it when I finish. Her life is hoirrble and great. She never has the same emotions, sometimes. The names where impossible to come up with though. xD
Names:
Applekit/paw, Blindapple (Main)
Pinekit/paw (Brother)
Poppykit/paw (Brother)
Fallenstick (Father)
Bramblecloud (Mother)
Butterflystar (Leader)
Mosswing (Medicine cat)
Goldenstar (leader)
Fishkit (Den mate/Best friend)
Bluestreak (Older sister)
Brownheart (deputy)
Happypaw/leaf (apprentice)
Redshell (Warrior)
Cloudmask (Warrior)
Orangefire (warrior)
Tuliptoes (warrior)
Whitespots (warrior)
Spottedflank (Elder)
Weedbubble (Elder)
Flyinghawk (Queen)


Applekit scrambled over to her brothers, Pinekit and Poppykit. Her mother was yawning and licking a small plump mouse that her mate had got. Her mother was Bramblecloud, her father was Fallenstick.
A small silvery she-cat, with a fish like pelt always made fun of the names. Her mother passed off when she was 4 moons old. Pinekit always had shown a litter tender love in him.
"Fishkit!" Called a voice, it was Flyinghawk. Whom had taken care of Fishkit when her mother passed away. Her own kit had just left the nursey, his name was Happykit. He always seemed to have a happy exipression on his face. "What are you doing?"
"Nothing Flyinghawk!" Fishkit called, brushing her tail agenst Pinekit's dark brown pelt. She ran over to her and licked her cheek. "I-I was just, well, Playing with little ol' Applekit. Why does she act so weird?"
"I don't act weird!" Applekit hissed, jumping over and toppling the younger kit. "I just have a diffrent personalty, everyone does. It's StarClan's sake!"
"StarClan is a tale for stupid little kits, I'm a smart one and don't believe in them. You are older than me, yet I still am smarter!" Fishkit hissed, her claws unsheathing.

"Applekit! Pinekit! Poppykit!" Bramblecloud hissed, standing up and twitching her tail, the kits followed as three cats walked in.
"Bluestreak!" Applekit yowled, nudging in her fur.
"Redshell!" Pinekit yowled, jumping over to the small warrior, his eyes glittering.
"Cloudmask...." Poppykit grumbled, he never seemed pleased on what anyone else did.

"Meet your new mentors. I see you all have picked your own, espicelly you Applekit. Bluestreak is the only one whom understands you." Bramblecloud mewed, "Your having your Apprenticing ceremony tonight. Goldenstar said they would all be perfect. Bluestreak is like an older Applekit, Redshell seems to like, and do everything that Pinekit likes, and finally, Cloudmask. The quite and moany one, Poppykit fits him perfectly."

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"All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather before the High Tree." Called a golden cat, whom's eyes where watching the three kits wander up with fear in their eyes. "Tonight, we congrat Applekit, Poppykit, and Pinekit on their 6th moon." he added, crawling down to meet the cats.
"Applekit, please jump into the High Tree and go into the highest branch, Bluestreak, please follow her." Goldenstar mewed, bowing his head and pointing to the highest branch, it had about three leaves on it, and it had a full veiw of the starry sky. The two cats obeyed and crawled up, Applekit shivered as the air began to become warmer. Bluestreak seemed fine, she pushed her along as they sat on the highest branch. It was the strongest of the high branches.
"Under StarClan's Veiw, I give this kit's power to Bluestreak! Make sure that Bluestreak's power is given to Applekit." Goldenstar yowled, Applekit looked down as Goldenstar finished up. "Do you, Applekit, take this full apprenticy?"
"Yes."
"Than may StarCLan light your path!"

The two cats hopped down and Pinekit walked up. All the Clan cats where cheering, she saw her Mother and Father begining to lick each other.
"Pinekit and Redshell, please go to the highest Branch." Goldenstar called as the cats obeyed. "Under StarClan's Veiw, I give this kit's power to Redshell! Make sure that Bluestreak's power is given to Pinekit!"
Goldenstar looked up at the quivering cat.
""Do you, Pinekit, take this full apprenticy?"
"I do."
"Than May StarClan light your path!"

The two cats walked down as Poppykit did the cermony. It went faster than any cat's.
Applekit turned to see Happypaw, scuffling into the front.
"Happypaw! Happypaw!" Called the Clan as they saw Whitespots, his mentor walked up with Happypaw. A large rabbit in his mouth.
"I see you found a rabbit. The best for the warrior cermony." Goldenstar mewed, he quickly put his mouth around the neck as Whitespots tugged, insently, they ripped apart. The head in Goldenstar's mouth and the body in Whitespots'.
Goldenstar quickly cleaned some of the rabbit blod of the head anf put it on Happypaw.
"Go to the highest Branch and gaze into the Stars young Happypaw." He meowed, watching the little apprentice climb up.
"Under StarClan's veiw, Do you, Happypaw, Promise to respect the Warrior code and the CLan?"
"I do!" Yowled the little apprentice
"Than I give you your full warrior name, Happyleaf!" Goldenstar finished up, as Happypaw lay down on the branch and fall asleep.
"You trained him well Whitespots. I see your getting old anyways. I feel you must retire soon." Goldenstar meowed, licking Whitespots' white and black fur.
"I know. But I will die in battle, not of old age. But, If I must. I will move into the elders' den tonight. Now I won't have to hunt for myself anymore." Whitespots whispered, walking father into the clearing, looking at the Great Star.
"Why do I have to meet you someday? Can't I just live down here and wait until the day comes that every cat leaves?" He though, shaking, he quickly scrambled into the warriors den, off to get his nest.



Applepaw awoke in the moring, glee in every blink and breath.
"Pinepaw! Poppypaw! Wake up wake up!" she mewed, nudging them.
Pinepaw's head rose and he shot a gaze of hate.
"What?" Poppypaw mewed, standing up and shaking the moss of his pelt.
"Today, we are going exploring with out mentors! We can go and and look by the big pool. Where we can-" Applepaw stopped, she saw Bluestreak walk into the den. "-where we can practive ouur hunting moves. Or battle training."
"Yes." Poppypaw and Pinepaw both mewed at the same time. Bluesteak whisked her tail and bounded out of the small cave like Apprentices' den,
"Ok. Remember what Happyleaf said about Brookpaw? He said she is from the other Clan, StoneClan, yeah, StoneClan. He met her all the time in a secret passage way. When our mentors leave to run after you two, you'll circle back and follow me into the hole. Then we can find out where it leads!" Applepaw mewed, grinning at every word.
"Bu-But Redmask, Bluestreak, and Cloudmask will be forious. We could get killed!" Pinepaw hissed, then he glanced Poppypaw was mummbling something.
"We'll head when the sun rise's to the highest point. I know secert way through Mosswing's den. It's so good, your sent is hidden through all the herbs sent." Applepaw planned, she glanced at Poppypaw, who was walking out of the den. "Deal?"
"Sure." Pinepaw mewed.
"Whatever." Poppypaw hissed.

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Applepaw led her brothers through Mosswing's den, who was in curing Weedbubble from a cold.
"See, that hole. Sneak through it, it will lead you to a tunnel outside." she mewed, softly. Pinepaw went in first, then Poppypaw, then Applepaw.
They found themselves in a clumb of bracken, they swiftly got out.
"I can smell the pool! Follow me!" Pinepaw called, Applepaw bounded after him. Poppypaw glanced back then followed.

Poppypaw skitted to the pool.
"There it is." Pinepaw called, moving some vines and twigs, revealing a large hole. It smelt strong of Happyleaf.
"Let's go!" Applepaw called running in. Pinepaw followed while behind, Poppypaw padded into the hole and set back up the vines.

"It's awful dark." Pinepaw mewed, bounding as fast as he could.
"Well, wer are almost there I am telling you." Applepaw mewed, running into a soft object.
"Who is there?" A faint mew came, it sounded of, Happyleaf!
"Happyleaf. Who are those three?" Another cat's mew suprised them.
"This is Applepaw, Pinepaw, and Poppypaw, Brookbubble." Happyleaf mewed, Applepaw could see a faint light from behind Happyleaf and the other cat.
"Why are you here?" Applepaw challeged.
Happyleaf sighed. "My true love is Brookbubble."
Brookbubble's silver fur bristled. "I love you too Happyleaf. But we can't be together. Let's take these three home now ok?"
"Yes Brookbubble. Let's go." Happyleaf mewed, pushing the three apprentices.


The three apprentices exited the hole, the two warriros following.
"Well, you three better head back. Me also. Goodbye Happyleaf. Meet you again in the high sun tomorrow." Brookbubble mewed, A faint gasp hurtled out of Pinepaw as they bounded to her.
"Look out!" he called, Applepaw and Poppypaw followed. A gaint branch crackled to the ground, smashing on the cats.

To be cont. <3

mewstar07
116 years & 30 days ago 25th Nov 2008 13:51
 
  1. Hm
    14th Nov 2013 14:35
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  2. Do YOU know herbiemn? :O
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  6. Blindapple's Story
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  7. Topics. <3
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  8. Herb Code and Fighting moves. ;]
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