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The Death Toll Chronicles: The Past

COPYWRITE: KRISTEN started writing in 2009


The Death Toll Chronicles

CHARACTERS
Riven: The Main character whose just a normal girl nerdy but is friendly everything changes when she meets two interesting girls from the past

Adam: Secretly in love with Riven but dating Leeha

Essence: Evil Sorceress who wants to enslave mankind also Celestial's sister

Celestial: Good Sorceress who wants mankind to be free also Essence's sister

Derek: Vampire friend to Celestial later falls in love with her

Daemeon: Essense's follower later falls in love with her

Emiliee: Essence and Celestial's mother

Leeha: Adam's girlfriend Riven's best friend

~more characters soon~



Book 1: TDTC: The Past

Chapter One: The Beginning Date: May 14th, 1896

Emiliee sighed as she looked up at the moon "Tis a beautiful night Alisha?" Alisha meowed then

looked at Emiliee with her bright green eyes. Emiliee picked her cat up "Let's go home..." On her

way home she felt kind of dizzy and sat down "Why am I so dizzy?" Emiliee thought. Alisha then

stood up on her two hind legs and morphed into a woman with black hair in a white dress. "On the

twelfth of the bell toll the spell shall be lifted on me and go to you for three thousand years!"

Laughed the witch. The church bell started to toll and slowly Emiliee began to change. Freaked out

she looked down and saw a weird symbol. All Emiliee could hear was the weird witch mumble a

weird language then blacked out. The next morning Emiliee woke up at her house and felt hungry

and exhausted. She went down stairs grabbed some milk then started chugging it out of the glass

container. Day by day Emiliee began to change more, she would purr when she was content then

having patches of fur all over her, with an occasional meow here and there. Twelve days past and

Emiliee was no longer human she had turned completely feline. "Wha....What happened to me?"

Emiliee thought starring at a stream of fish as soon as one went by she pawed at it and began to eat

the raw flopping fish. The soon set and the moon was full and bright Emiliee turned human a hunter

near by saw her "WITCH!! A WITCH!!" He cried in alarm and Emiliee was then shot by a arrow

piercing her heart by the hunter. Emiliee looked at him "Please tell my daughters not to mourn for

me they are safe from all evil. With an evil laugh the Witch came to Emiliee "Your daughters will

have the curse of the Death Toll and may they die a slow and painful death!!" Emiliee passed away

on August 30th 1898.

Chapter 2: Unexpected Visitor August 30th, 2009

"MAN! I CAN'T SLEEP!" Riven said angrily as she sat up in bed pushing her dark burgundy hair out of

her eyes. "I wonder what time it is." she thought leaning over to glance at the clock. "FOUR O

CLOCK!?" She screamed "Two more hours and I have school!!" Riven face planted in her pillow with

a heavy sigh then came a knock downstairs. "Who could that be at this hour..?" Riven walked down

stairs in her robe and opened the door and nothing there. Riven rolled her eyes and started to walk

back up stairs then a knock came again tired of this game she opened the door once again and

nothing. Just as she shut the door a cold hand grabbed her and she started screaming. Her dad

laughed "I got you!" smiling down at his little girl. "DAD!! Don't do that!" She ran upstairs and

slammed the door. Very tired it was time for school and Riven slothed her way outside and waited

for the bus. She looked up and saw her best friend Adam Shank walking out he saw her waved then

headed towards her. "Poor Adam..... He's the laughing stock of the whole school! Even though hes

dating the most popular and gorgeous girl in the whole school. But sadly people still laugh at him"

Riven thought. The bus came and Adam generously let Riven in first since it was Adam is a

gentlemen and believes all girls should go first. Riven saw her best friend Leehas head slumped

down into her note book and soft sobbing, "what happened Leeha? Why are you crying?" Riven

asked curiously. "Oh! Riven!! Someone came to my house and an old lady grabbed me and said

something about a curse! then she just disappeared in front of my eyes! It was so scary Riven!"

Leeha burst into tears even more. "Who was it!?" Riven asked scared "I....I....I don't know I never

seen her before!"

Chapter 3: Leeha's Gone! September 2, 2009

Riven was sitting next to Leeha, just three days ago no one knew that it was going to happened. It

was all over the news, papers, and school. Leeha was surely gone, kidnapped people believe but

Riven thinks something worse had happened. Riven could not sleep she was sick to her stomach

which made her toss and turn all night remembering about what Leeha said about the mysterious

woman at her door. The next morning Riven got a phone call from Adam he was crying then he took

a deep breath "Riven......They found Leeha.....She's dead!! A woman found her, near the creek the

one where we used to play, until they closed it down due to many kids drowning. She drowned

Riven... Shes gone..." Riven dropped the phone in shock and her eyes began to tear up then

collapsed and cried for her best friend. Riven could hear Adam on the other end of the phone yelling

for her but Riven couldn't answer she was just crying to hard. A few days later Riven looked over the

casket which held her best friend. Her soft rosy cheeks now pale her long luscious red hair turning

white, and her beautiful green eyes with no color. Riven cried but knew her friend was in a better

place she felt Adam hug her tightly and helped her to her seat. After the funeral Adam and Riven

looked down at the grave stone both of them spoke at once "Here lies Leeha Born May 5th 1994

Died: August 30th 2009. Riven and Adam sat down and had a couple of ice cream sodas they were

both still feeling sad but knew they had each other and both agreed not to let anything happened to

one another.

Chapter 4: Resurrection May 15th, 1899

"Legend tells that my mother was murdered for black magic. I have found away to revive her but... I

need your help Daemeon" A black cloaked figure whispered. "Who are you? From your voice you

are a female?" Daemeon replied "Do not fear me Daemeon if you help me find my mothers book I

will spare you." The mysterious woman answered. "My fair lady I will help you but I do not know

your name and yet you know mine?" Daemeon asked nervously. "My name...My name? Oh yes.. you

should know my name tis Essence." Essence said happily. "Very well Essence I will show you, your

mothers grave that is." He replied back. It was a cold winter and hard to travel the snow was so

deep that it was just over the ankles. Five days pass and they came to a stop and looked up at a

huge tomb with a large seal on the door. "This is it." Daemeon said. Essence poked at the tombs

door "Well? How do ye open thus?" she asked. "Use the black magic, speak the words of the Death

Toll curse." Daemeon answered. Just as Essence was about to speak she heard a yell from the

distance. "Well if it isn't my twin sister Celestial how are you today?" Essence snapped. "Essence you

can't open that tomb you and I both know what will happened if you do it wil-" "ENOUGH!" Essence

angrily interrupted "I will open that tomb I will get the book mother used! I will show all of

Jamestown that mother is back and came to smite them all for making her suffer! Even if I have to

kill you to get it!" Essence yelled. "No! I won't let you resurrect mother!" Celestial screamed.

Celestial grabbed her pig tail which soon morphed into a gold bow with a lightning arrow and shot it

at Essence missing by a few inches the arrow hit the tomb door and pulled Celestial in.

Celestial woke up in a pitch black room with nothing there she tried to have her eyes adjust but they

just wouldn't. Her long blond hair now covered with dirt made it look gross. "Hello!!" she called

"Someone help me!" Just then a dark figure moved around in the shadows with a arrow in her heart

came to her. "Why... My daughter Celestial however did you get in here?" "mo...mom?!" Celestials

eyes widen then she collapsed and passed out once again. Days went by and Celestial woke up next

to a warm fire and a young man cooking some bacon "Hiya! Want some bacon? My names Derek

whats yours? I found you passed out and you looked cold." Derek smiled as he asked.

"Celes....Celestial" she answered tiredly "Cute name.." He told her. They ate dinner and Celestial told

him everything about her twin sister Essence and how she wanted to enslave mankind he listened

carefully then agreed to help her but that changed when the tomb was open and there was nothing

there. It had happened Emiliee was alive again to avenge her death all across Jamestown.

Chapter 5: Sorry! September 7th, 2009

~Coming Soon~

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