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Giraffes
  1. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(S-Z)
    22nd Sep 2019 09:04
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  2. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(M-R)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:52
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  3. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(G-L)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:39
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  4. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(#-F)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:28
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  5. Siggies
    1st Jun 2018 09:04
    6 years, 6 months & 26 days ago
  6. TY
    7th Sep 2009 10:22
    15 years, 3 months & 19 days ago
  7. Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
    15th Aug 2008 16:13
    16 years, 4 months & 11 days ago
Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
16 years, 4 months & 11 days ago
15th Aug 2008 16:13

We dance all night long
When the music stops you say "Play another song"
Then everyone leaves and the laughter is gone
You and I sit here its totally calm
As we sit you grab my palm
You look into my eyes as they glisten
And I sit there quietly as I listen
I love you you tell me
And its then and there,
I know
You and I are meant to
Be


We gaze at the night sky
We tell each other not one lie
Its me and you
You and I
For then you grab my hand and say
"I can not be with you, I can not stay"
The cracks my heart, straight in two,
But then I realize I can't be with you
I sigh and pull away from your grasp
I slip away from you at last



The time we share will always be treasured
My darling dear for now and forever
You will be loved I can honestly say
Day after day after day after day
You are my love
You are my joy
Even though you are a pixel
Even though your but a toy
You will be treasured with out a doubt
Though if I don't get you I will not pout


Ok, Will be adding more soonhappy.gif Thanks for reading! Please rate!!

Giraffes
Thanks lidia! I'll change that
116 years, 4 months & 11 days ago 15th Aug 2008 17:37
 
It's Really nice, but i think this would work better:

As we sit you grab my palm
You look 'into' my eyes as they glisten
116 years, 4 months & 11 days ago 15th Aug 2008 17:29
 
um 1st poem aint has 3 lines in a row rhyming dont really like that.

i think you should take out the you and i sit here its totally calm.

you also need some commas.
116 years, 4 months & 11 days ago 15th Aug 2008 16:19
 
Giraffes
^.^ Thanks
116 years, 4 months & 11 days ago 15th Aug 2008 16:16
 
1000000000000000000/10
116 years, 4 months & 11 days ago 15th Aug 2008 16:15
 
  1. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(S-Z)
    22nd Sep 2019 09:04
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  2. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(M-R)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:52
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  3. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(G-L)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:39
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  4. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(#-F)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:28
    5 years, 3 months & 5 days ago
  5. Siggies
    1st Jun 2018 09:04
    6 years, 6 months & 26 days ago
  6. TY
    7th Sep 2009 10:22
    15 years, 3 months & 19 days ago
  7. Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
    15th Aug 2008 16:13
    16 years, 4 months & 11 days ago